Hi Joseph it’s Jade from Te Ngahere. I liked looking at your exquisite slide show, and I hope you make more so I can read and enjoy them. What you were saying there is so much pollution in the world in and it is absolutely true, and I hope that the world will change and everyone will stop polluting. Do you pick up rubbish if you see it? Have you ever seen anyone drop rubbish?
Kia ora Joseph, it’s Ben from Te Ngahere. I like your blog post and animation about the whale. Your animation is cool but what is it actually about because at first it’s like the shark wants to eat the main whale but then it goes onto pollution. Also I think you could write a bit more. Other than that I think your blog post is great. What is your favourite part of the animation?
Hi Joseph it’s Jade from Te Ngahere. I liked looking at your exquisite slide show, and I hope you make more so I can read and enjoy them. What you were saying there is so much pollution in the world in and it is absolutely true, and I hope that the world will change and everyone will stop polluting. Do you pick up rubbish if you see it? Have you ever seen anyone drop rubbish?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Joseph, it’s Ben from Te Ngahere. I like your blog post and animation about the whale. Your animation is cool but what is it actually about because at first it’s like the shark wants to eat the main whale but then it goes onto pollution. Also I think you could write a bit more. Other than that I think your blog post is great. What is your favourite part of the animation?
ReplyDeleteI liked your animation because of all the funny jokes. Your animation reminds me of whales. Why was there pollution in the sea?
ReplyDeleteHi Joseph I like the way you did words that you wouldn’t use normally. That reminds me of a photo of a whale. Next time put more characters please.
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